Oh goodness she’s a PewDiePie fan, I can only wonder what kind she is. Oh well, Internet brofist to her.
OOHHH MY GOSH I KNOW NED. D: At one time she was a Sue, I think, but it says this is an updated ref so let’s see.
Oh geeze. Possessed, an impossible hybrid (how can irkens AND Meekrob AND humans all be compatible like that), and apparently murdered her whole crew when she was a military leader despite you know people in the military being very well trained and should have been able to stop her. And she did it just to get the Tallest’s attention, wow such edge much violent. (because buying them a delicious box of nachos wouldn’t have had the same effect on them I guess)
Also why is her tongue blue, irkens don’t have blue tongues, they’re purplish. Also crazy antennae. Even if she’s apparently got human and Meekrob in there somehow, I doubt the genes would be significant enough to actually make her blood and tongue somehow blue like that. Humans don’t have that coloring, and the Meekrob are a much paler, less saturated kind of blue.
and of course she apparently has ‘goes to Earth’ if she has a human form. I can only hope that’s just a disguise and not her literally being able to transform into a human. Is there some kind of Animorphs-esque morphing technology in the IZ universe we don’t know about? D:
In all, still a Sue, I am disappoint. I know I usually base my judgments on backstories and not just designs, but there was no more info about how the heck she’s like this, so I can only go on appearance. And just from what’s on the ref, she’s way too much.
My thoughts? Make her fully one species, or even just half and half, not a mix of like three that I doubt are compatible enough. Make her have relevant coloring to whatever species she is, and get rid of the whole ‘possessed’ thing unless you can somehow do it in a way that’s not terribly cliche. And rethink that ‘murdered her whole crew’ thing because unless she literally blew up their ship from somewhere else, I doubt they would let her get away with that. Even in our human military, if a superior suddenly went crazy and tried to kill his soldiers, they would subdue him. And then probably dishonorably discharge that fool. I can’t imagine irkens being much different.
So yeah, Ned definitely needs work. :\